When she smiles

when she smiles at me
my blank goes mind
i lose my speech of power
and word all my forgets
i can’t even sentence a string together
when she smiles at me

5 responses

  1. how lovely that smile must be…

    13.06.10 at 13.14

  2. Nice!

    12.03.09 at 01.14

  3. Gillian Colbert

    One thing I love about how you write is that you use the actual text structure to reinforce your themes. Lovely!

    12.03.08 at 22.29

    • thanks *smiles* even though sometimes, like here, its a tad obvious – cheers darlin’

      12.03.08 at 22.32

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