Your open mouth

Nothing is as beautiful
As you are when you come.
Your open mouth,
Your half closed eyes,
The quivering of your thighs.

13 responses

  1. womensdiary

    I’ve heard of it, but never experienced such a thing

    12.04.10 at 18.33

    • then you truly have something to look forward to 😉

      12.04.10 at 18.34

      • womensdiary

        Its been 5yrs since i’ve lost my virginity. And slept only retards. I CANNOT wait for that day to hurry the hell up haha

        12.04.10 at 18.37

        • don’t sleep with retards, seems to be the solution here – find yourself a real man honey and good luck. come back here and tell us all about it, why not?

          12.04.10 at 18.43

  2. Love it. Especially the title.

    12.04.09 at 15.53

    • thank you – i’m glad you liked it

      12.04.10 at 11.27

  3. I Always Thought It Was Spelled “Cum” 😉
    I HAD TO, I SWEAR!!!
    “They” Made Me, Fo SHO!!!

    12.04.09 at 13.19

    • come is the verb meaning orgasm and cum is the noun meaning semen
      thanks for enjoying brad 🙂

      12.04.09 at 13.20

  4. TheOthers1

    Ooh, very nice. My kinda poetry. 🙂

    12.04.09 at 13.19

    • yeah i love the brevity of your stuff, it lends it power i think – i sat there thinking of a second verse and then thought ‘why? fuck it, hit ‘publish” – so thanks

      12.04.09 at 13.22

  5. I love that Kyle.

    Thank you!

    12.04.09 at 13.16

    • I love that you love it Dawn

      Thank you

      12.04.09 at 13.18

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