Pirates
i asked a friend,
a she,
why she wanted
so much
to be by the sea.
it makes me
feel free,
she said to me,
i want an island
and to swim you see?
i get that,
i said,
but tell me now,
why an island,
not an archipelago?
it could be
an isthmus
or a peninsular,
i don’t give a fuck,
as long we arepirates building
in the sand,
salt in our hair,
your cock
in my hand.
All these comments…and not one about a booty call (see what I did there?)
12.07.11 at 08.47
haha yes, brilliant
12.07.12 at 05.19
interesting word play.
12.07.08 at 11.57
thanks
12.07.09 at 07.07
I’ve got a dirty short story about some pirates 😉 people who’ve read it have liked it a lot, I might post it on my blog soon.
12.07.08 at 08.28
you really should, especially if you’re getting good feedback – you’ll never know unless you try and please feel free to post a link here – i, for one, will read it.
12.07.08 at 08.37
Yeah I just started my blog yesterday, I only have a handful of views, but only one erotic story up so far, about a gladiator 😉 http://wp.me/p2zB09-r
12.07.08 at 08.43
good luck with that max – it can be slow at first but keep posting and reading other blogs and liking and commenting and, before you know it you will have hundreds of followers.
one thing i think i’ve learned is that a lot of blog readers are not looking for lengthy reads – i have a rule: for every 100 words over 500, expect half as many readers. love your avatar btw, very piratey
12.07.08 at 08.58
Cheers for the tip, I’ll keep it in mind 🙂
12.07.08 at 09.05
nice!
12.07.08 at 04.05
thank you gorgeous
12.07.08 at 05.31
I don’t remember the last part, but otherwise, I like it.
12.07.07 at 19.59
i think they said something in the bible about building on sand – poets are like sand, we add, we subtract, we shift like the sands themselves – i could write this a million times and each time it would change – glad you liked most of it though – thank you for commenting – shame i don’t have a “liked most of it” button or i am sure you would have clicked it
12.07.07 at 20.12
sand, like time, slipping through our fingers.
12.07.07 at 20.18
very true la la and thank you again, sand is precious and beautiful but fleeting and unstable and not something to build on
12.07.07 at 20.24
Love this!
12.07.07 at 19.34
love you
12.07.07 at 20.07
pirates playing in the sand
your treasured bounty in her hand
oh ho…the family jewels in peril
the salty sea your eyes may blind
you to the motives of her mind
she’ll fling your arse over a barrel
when the jewel box she does hold
reveals your bounty is not gold
she’ll turn you loose and you’ll go feral
another pirate mate she’ll snare
again & again & again she’ll dare
until she finds her golden hero
she’s sailed the seas from days of old
to quote yourself ” so I’m told ”
for once stay home and send in Carol
arrrrr….maybe this pirate’s been looking in the wrong box all along eh?
12.07.07 at 11.40
wow – that’s gotta be the best ever response to a post i’ve ever had – thank you rhonda woman
12.07.07 at 12.21
arrrrrrrr – yer welcome matey
12.07.07 at 12.25
“she’ll turn you loose and you;ll go feral’….fabulous
12.07.07 at 14.59
ha…hard to rhyme words with peril, i tell ya.
learn something new everyday. arrrrrrr
12.07.07 at 16.18
Aye aye matey..
12.07.07 at 16.42
Love this!! I’m a sailor and an island-girl (and a pirate at heart)… Gotta share this one with the hubby 😉
12.07.07 at 11.24
aaaarrrrr you now? thanks 😉
12.07.07 at 12.20
Sweet.
12.07.07 at 11.20
aww thanks – never tell anyone else i’m sweet tho – it’d blow my cover lol
12.07.07 at 12.19
How romantic!
Bisous,
Dawn
12.07.07 at 11.04
pirates always aaarrrrr
12.07.07 at 11.13
I do love to be beside the seaside … lalalala
12.07.07 at 10.55
that’s so beautifully british
12.07.07 at 11.10
🙂 still irish
12.07.07 at 11.21
I shall never look at the beach the same again……inspirational!
12.07.07 at 10.51
you may never have to … thank you
12.07.07 at 11.10
What a lucky pirate she is.
12.07.07 at 10.05
this poem was inspired
by a pirate of old
she still sails the seas
in search of her gold
or so i am told
12.07.07 at 10.27
🙂
12.07.07 at 10.39
She sounds brilliant, really.
12.07.07 at 11.43
This lovely pirate of yours….you should definitely keep close to her shore!
12.07.07 at 09.54
this pirate was just a dream
12.07.07 at 10.22
*smiles*the shore in your dreams then. Speaking of shores….I’m going to go and lay upon one in a few …..have a lovely day you……xo’s
12.07.07 at 11.04